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Wednesday, 15 April 2015

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Fifteen: The Tower( Part One) 24/24

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938 comments:

  1. Omg so that is really Carpet. So cool and amazing twist. Hope she remains an ally!

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    1. I agree Carpet looks beautiful!

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    2. I'm glad you like her human design! The carpet has been always an ally, she has no reason to be against Jasmine now :D.

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  2. So Aurora sees Maleficent. The next few pages will be a must-see. Will this scene be at all connected to the one in deviantart with Cinderella and Aurora freeing Alice?

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    1. No, they are not connected, sorry :(. The scene you saw in deviantart is just a concept art :D.

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  3. Lol, I always knew Carpet had suggesting curves :o

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  4. The improving in the backgrounds are amazing! I love the new Carpet's form, she's gorgeous.

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  5. I think I'm in love. Carpet is so pretty and exotical, I love her! BTW, I suposse Maleficent is the one who Aurora has found, since she didn't meet any other villian until now except Grimhilde, and this last one is enable to travel between worlds, am I right?

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  6. Seriously, I LOVE all the OC you're creating in this story. I also love the Disney ones of course( specially Belle, Alice and Snow White, they're my favorites), but I feel like all these new characters and their stories are fitting perfectly well with the classics, all the new ladies are so pretty and different from another.
    Also the gentlemen have a great design, I cannot wait for the featuring of that handsome blonde monsier and that black haired hottie! Gosh, I can't choose between them... I think I have a weird problem...

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    1. I'm glad you like all our OC :D :D. You haven't a problem, I can't choose between them too ;D.

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  7. I must say, I never saw that twist with Carpet coming--and I love it!
    I just hope Jasmine doesn't keep calling her "Carpet" now--it would be kind of awkward. XD.

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    1. I'm glad you like the twist of the carpet :D!

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  8. Did the magic carpet have a human form before or it's a magic consequence for standing in that place? Or maybe it's because of the glass slipper magic?

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  9. I love the castle backgrounds. They're really weel made.

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  10. I think that Jasmine's last face is due to she realized that if the carpet is human now, they can't fly away of that plataform lmao.

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  11. Love the new red haired girl! Go Aurora, go!

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  12. Every new chapter I'm more and more hooked. I love the new aspect of the carpet, such an original twist! Keep the magnificent work :D

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  13. Cover very pretty but Rose Red remind me more of anime style than disney style there. i'm not sure why, but her depiction seems off compared on the cover

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    1. Technically Rose Red is a little older in the cover, perhaps she looks like an anime style because the lines of the cover are very thin :).

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  14. Love this carpet design, remind me of a female genie! While on subject of new character, will we meet that brunette girl from the last header in this chapter? The pretty one with purple eyes...

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    1. She is a female genie ;). The brunnete girl will appear in a few more chapters...

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  15. Now we know who the red haired woman from the background was :)

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  16. Yesss, a new chapter! And at last we'll see Aurora vs Maleficent!

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  17. You two are really good writers. I've never been so worried about an OC in a facfiction before as I am now about Rose Red and this tragical cover. Your work is really amazing!

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  18. Hooray, we back to Aurora's story again! I wonder if Maleficent knows that she was helped by Quetzal...

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  19. Ah, very quickly answered! :D
    So... who of you have a thing for redheads? So many redheads!

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    1. Yes, I have a thing for readheads, I just love that hair colour ;D.

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  20. I think I'm in love with the blonde bishie.

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    1. Is he a fairy tale character or something?

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    2. Perhaps the original frog prince

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    3. A mytological character?

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  21. When I first saw this chapter, I couldn't help but squeal. It was a good thing nobody was around, or they would have thought I've gone nuts. I love Carpet's new design, and the look on Jasmine's face. I just wonder who Aurora saw in the castle.

    I also have a few questions: Why did Quetzal help Aurora? How did Snow and Cindy end up in that dark place with Ariel and Belle? Where did Ariel get that trident? Why in the cover here is Rose Red's throat slit? Why are the villains after them, particularly the OCs? *gasp* Is the brunette from the old header Christine Daae?

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    1. The brunette girl is not Christine Daae, I can't tell you anything about the rest of questions, that would be a huge spoiler ;D.

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  22. Is Sonne still working on this?

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    1. Sonne is dead. I have eaten him ;D (I was kidding). Just look at the index, there you will have the answer ;D.
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    2. lol oh no you turned into Hilda monster D; // ;D hehe
      He never comments anymore, so it's like is he still alive xD lol

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    3. Don't worry, He is still breathing...At least for now :D.

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  23. Interesting new design for the chapter covers. Will you redesign the other covers so they all look the same? Or would you prefer the difference since the story is taking a turn and the characters are starting to connect. I take it that red haired silhouette is this new genie girl. Is the other one supposed to be Carmilla or Snow White? One last thing... Jasmine's my favorite and she's had less screentime so far. I'm happy we're checking on her.

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    1. About the new the design of the covers.. I changed it because the old one ''invades'' literally 60% of the illustrations... The frame was too big and it was necessary a radical change ;).The other silhouette is Carmilla ;D.

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  24. This scene makes me wonder...what species is Maleficent? Also Ursula too.

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    1. ursula was a mermaid, she is an octopus just for a curse. Maleficent is something harder to explain :D

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    2. Perhaps we will see that next...

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    3. Also when Ursula was a mermaid, did she look like Vanessa?

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    4. Isn't Maleficent a (dark)fairy? I think that was made pretty clear by Disney...

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    5. Disney never said Maleficent was a fairy, she is a dark fairy in the original fairy tale, not in Disney version. The origin of her nature is in her name and her powers. Maleficent is actually a Maleficarum. A Maleficarum is a witch who obtains her powers from Lucifer, and when she has enough experience, she turns into a demon( a dragon is a demon in Christian mythology and she attacks with fire, as the witches from christian mythology). She even threats Prince Phillip ''with all the power of hell''. SO technically, Maleficent is actually a demon who was a witch before :D. If you are interested on this, I recommend you to read the book ''Malleus maleficarum''. It explains how a witch turns herself into animals and even dragons, her rituals, the nature of her powers... Just look at her physical appearance... She is more a dragon than a woman.
      There are many Maleficarum in movies en videogame, like Flemeth from Dragon Age or Madame Mim from the sword and the stone.

      And about ursula, She was exactly as Vannessa with a fishtail :D.

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    6. But the live-action version said she was a fairy...

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    7. The live action is a story completely different from the original one, and totally incompatible with the original animated classic. Please... in the live Maleficent wakes Aurora with a true love kiss... the original Maleficent never would do that, she hates Aurora, she even laughed when she was apparently dead in the floor... The live version is a completely different story, something ''alternative'', not consecutive to the animated classic.

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    8. Thanks for answering everything!

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  25. So I think the cover is Rose Red, Carmilla, and Snow White's mother. Am I right? :)

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  26. Aurora VS Maleficent ?

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  27. Magnificent work !

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  28. Me encanta alfombra. es BELLISIMA. Y la piel morada le keda genial. x cierto, en comentarios anteriores vi k dijisteis k ibais a poner a Tiana en el comic. k alegría me llevé al leerlo ya que es mi princesa favorita, pero dijisteis k le ibais a hacer un cambio como hicisteis con Wendy. bueno algo así lei. fue hace tiempo. en caso d k le vayáis a hacer un cambio, será de otra época como a Wendy u otra cosa?? y saldrá pronto o habrá k esperar? x cierto, vais a añadir algún personaje español?? como dijisteis que iba a haber multiculturalidad y como soy española me entro curiosidad.
    por cierto, me encanta el comic. el dibujo es precioso y me encanta la textura, los personajes, los diseños, todo. sobre todo me gusta k no sea un comic corto, sino uno largo, con más de 50 capítulos. espero k pronto sakeis el comic en papel. un saludo

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    1. Si, saldra Tiana, pero en otra epoca y con una historia fiel a su cuento original :D. SI añadiremos a un par de personajes españoles, uno de ellos sera la sevillana Carmen, protagonista de la opera de Georges Bizet :D.Nos gustaria sacar el comic pronto, p'ero hay mucho que remakear del capitulo 12 para abajo (nos moririamos de verguenza de sacar el comic yal y como ahora esta). Haremos que sea lo mas barato posible, ya que no queremos sacarle ningun tipo de beneficio economico al comic, ya que lo hacemos solo por diversion y sin animo de lucro ;D.
      Postdata: La proxima vez comenta en el capitulo en español por favor ;).

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  29. So I was rereading the chapters and it was left kinda open ended. Was Cinderella's prince killed?

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  30. Hey Breadfly!!! What parts of this comic do you do and what parts does Sonne do?

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    1. Let's say we used to rotate the work, when I´m tired of working Sonne relieves and vice versa ;D.

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  31. Cette série est très intéressante, j'admire vraiment votre travaille. Mais est-ce serait possible que tous les chapitres soient traduis en Français?

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    1. Merci de ces gentillesses. Nous apprécions vraiment votre intérêt :). Mais la traduction dépend de un ami, pas de nous. :(.

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  32. OMG OMG OMG this tension is going to kill me!!

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  33. Oh man I really can feel the tension in the air... Something tells me this chapter is going to be pretty intense :D

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    1. You are totally right. This chapter will be really tense, the most tense of all them until now.

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  34. Wow... Carpet look really beautiful as a human... Though I always imagined it her as a male carpet. xD
    And Maleficent's back! Yay! I feel like we're going to discover her backstory. I can't wait to see what happen next. :3

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    1. I always thought the carpet was a female carpet, In my opinion it moves very gracefully to be a male one :D.
      You will know more about Maleficent very soon :D.

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    2. Maybe I believed that Aladdin's Carpet is a male because in my language when we say "that carpet" we use masculine pronoun instead of feminine. ^^
      Also Carpet kissed Jasmine's hand like a gentleman in the movie. xD

      I'm glad. I remember as a kid I was so much scared of Maleficent I couldn't even watch Sleeping Beauty... Now she's one of my favourite villains. <3

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    3. I see! In spanish the word carpet (alfombra) is a female name, anyway, a carpet is a carpet, it has no gender, just dust mites xD.
      I was really scared of Maleficent too when i was a child... she scared me more than Freddy Crugger and Candyman xD.

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  35. What program you use for this comic and how you do it?,just for curiosity.Im a ilustrator too.I really like the shadows effects and expressions.Sorry but i work only in book Illustration,not comics...:(

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    1. We use Adobe photoshop CC, but lately we are also using Comic Studio (just for inking). The coloring we realize in this comic is really simple, At the beginning of the colouring of a comic page we create a flat coloring layer, next we create another one with all the shadows ( this layer has to be in multiply mode) and next we blend the shadows with a blender brush. The next layer is about the lights, we just use white colour with a low opacity and the layer in soft light or overlay mode (about 9%), that's it :D.
      I think the most important part of our colouring process is the layer with the watercolour texture I created traditionally (the layer has to be in overlay mode and low opacity, about 30-40%). It gives to the comic that special texture it has :D.

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  36. I am so excited for the next pages...Maleficent is revealing something important!! One question though, why is Maleficent's face so green. It was lighter in earlier chapters and the movie with a very light green shade, almost gray.

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    1. Maleficent's face has been always green, look at this original cel:
      http://media.liveauctiongroup.net/i/9646/10499078_1.jpg?v=8CE714121AD3130

      The colours in the Sleeping Beauty are generally darker than the other Disney movies ;D.

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  37. Something in the mountain...maybe Chernabog of Bald Mountain. Will he ever appear? He is more evil than Maleficent.

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  38. Does Berthalda have any powers? Besides being a bitch of course lol. Also is she of royal blood, or really a pauper raised in nobility like in the play?

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    1. Berthalda has no powers by herself. Her magic belongs to the necklace she stole from Ondine ;D:

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    2. Oh that is what was meant earlier! So does she have mermaid/sea witch powers.

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  39. Will Snow´s mother appear again? I LOVE her design. ;)

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  40. Next update? :D

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  41. Is Berthalda a princess too?

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    1. No she wasn't. But if I remember her story correctly she was a noble.

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    2. Berthalda is the foster daughter of a powerful duke and his duchess but the real daughter of Undine’s foster parents, who lost her shortly before Undine came to them.

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  42. hey i have a question.......Is maleficent helping Aurora or is she setting her up for another trap? also i like the new page 6 also its really scary that maleficent still controls aurora like that

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    1. Maleficent is not helping Aurora, that's for sure. Everything has its reason :)

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  43. I think Aurora is going to meet the girls... :3

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  44. Why Maleficent is now too "kind" with Aurora?

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    1. Yes it seems out of character

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    2. She's not really kind she's sarcastic. Also, she is still manipulating her and sending away from her home, so her acting is not really that nice. And of course, there's a reason behind his behavior ;)

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  45. Place you bets people!! Where do you think Aurora will end up?

    1.) With Jasmine
    2.) With Belle, Ariel, Cinderella, and Snow White
    3.) Alone
    4.) With Wendy and Alice
    5.) Other...(explain who/where)

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    1. with jasmine

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    2. ohhh wendy and alice :)

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  46. No Aurora !! The suite, please !

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    1. Ariel and Belle and Cinderella and Snow white

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  47. The newest pages are amazing...and Aurora's dress is gorgeous! It's just... Maleficent is too mice to Aurora....why a sudden change?

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    1. It's not really a change. Until now, Maleficent hasn't taken reprisals directly against Aurora. She did it through Philip. Maleficent is a cold and calculating character and everything she does what she does for a reason. Besides, she's not being nice, she's being sarcastic to Aurora :).

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  48. Those voices... are they just one person, it´s Philip or something?
    What son?

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    1. There're more than one person. All I can say is that Philip isn't one of them :)

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  49. Wow you have done 2 pages in two days. ;)

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    1. Yes, we have some time free time at last :)

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  50. Oh, and I love the last pannel with Aurora and the voices. It´s beautiful!

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    1. Thanks! I like that panel too :D

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  51. If I'm right about these voices, then our little Sleeping Beauty wasn't that innocent after all XD. Perhaps and extra-marital affair? Everything could had happened in those lost 16th years. I love all the plot-twists!!!! This is the less predictible story I have ever read!!!!!

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  52. Is Phillip's father a voice lamenting losing his son. Who is this queen and her lover? What son...is Aurora pregnant? We know she has descendants so somehow she has children.

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    1. The voices are talking about two different kids, and none of them have a connection with Aurora. That's all I can say :)

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    2. Rose Red and Melody, or maybe Hilda too.

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  53. Is it just me or is Maleficent off-model in that last page? Also her skin seems too green.

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    1. The faces in the Sleeping Beauty movie are very particular because they change a lot in certain angles and expressions:
      https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSxBTHUQFMW3raIfQyxKlERPwnQ5BWPRunbJnkEm5gSOoldyGmH
      Or maybe is the shading which makes you see her different. Respect her skin tone, there's a strong green light in the room as you can see in the previous pages. In another circumstances with a neutral light she will look less green :)

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  54. I knew something like was gonna happen. There was no way she could put a scratch on Maleficent

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  55. How does Ursula change from her mermaid Vanessa form to the octopus form? Which state does she prefer?

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    1. Ursula was an Octopus just for a curse, but now the curse is broken :D.

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    2. Oh that's interesting. She seemed to enjoy her octopus form in the movie...or at least the curves aspect.

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  56. Great as always, love Carpet's design especially!
    Also, what do you think of the live-action Cinderella? As far as I can tell, I like it better than Maleficent.. Buuuut nothing new.

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    1. We don't like the new Cinderella movie. :(. It's better than Maleficent but honestly, I think it's impossible making an adaptation of a classic disney movie worse than ''Maleficent'' xD.

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  57. Sharply the news pages

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  58. Awesome !! Aladdin vs Jafar ?

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  59. Aladdin, watch out!

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  60. Umm,our blog is amazing!But can you do a video when you draw a panel or something,i really want to see how you and Sonne works.Sorry for my bad english,i'm italian. (:

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    1. We have already some videos of our creation process. But we have to editing them ;).

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    2. That's great can't wait to see them! :) Good luck with the comic!

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  61. Will Cleopatra appear in the comic? :D

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  62. Jafar looks really Egyptian :) I love it! It's good to see Al's pretty face again too <3 Keep up the great work!

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  63. I am curious to learn more about the little cat Jafar is stroking--if she (I assume the cat is female, but could be wrong) even is a little cat to begin with.

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    1. About the cat, her name is Bastet ;).

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    2. Oh like the goddess.

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    3. That name fits her perfectly!

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  64. Where did Jafar come from? Is he working with the other villains?

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    1. Yes, he is working with the other villians ;). We will explain where he came from ;).

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  65. Why is Jafar dressed like an Egyptian?

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    1. That's because he is egyptian. His clothes are egyptian, he has an Apofis Wand (Apofis was a giant snake in egyptian mythology who represents the evil), his make up is egyptian and he knows how to hypnotize (hypnosis is an egyptian invention). I just gave him a OTT egyptian style :D.

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    2. Oh that is an interesting twist. I makes the Aladdin world and mythology richer to have characters of different races and not all Iraqi (Agrabah is medieval Baghdad)

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    3. Oh that's cool :) I never knew that

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  66. Ugh he is back. I am happy with his redesign though.

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  67. Love! Will we ever see Rothbart and Odile from Swan Lake (the classic story not Swan Princess)?

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    1. OMG I would love to see Odette and Rothbart drawn in your style, the dress would surely be gorgeus because your are so good designers, aby other ballet charcters to appear?

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    2. Yes I can imagine Odette as a dark-haired beauty with pale skin. Quite like the brunette with violet eyes in the previous header.

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  68. Wait...Aurora is still a princess right? I mean, her parents are alive.

    And the red voice, that's Maleficent, right?

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  69. What race or ethnicity is Berthalda? She looks asian to me.

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    1. Is she japanese or something? Will any japanese character appear?

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    2. Berthalda is half-breed( her mother was mongolian and her father was Russian). She is a strange breed who emerged when Mongolia was invading Russia in 1237 in some specifics points of Europe ;). About japanese characters, Madame Butterfly will appear in this comic ;).

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    3. Oh that is a very sad opera. More tragedies it seems but I'm looking forward to it.

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  70. OMG OMG OMG! I want to be his lover too!!

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  71. Finally this man is back!! :DDD He's so sexy ^//////^
    Gosh I hope he stays in the scene a little longer instead of dissapear after he gave some homicidal advice to somebody :o

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    1. xD Don't worry about that, he will be with us for a long time ;).

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  72. Calypso, like THE Calypso, the godess from the Odyssey and former lover of Odysseus? Or its just a random name
    BTW I love opera so the fact that Carmen and Cio-Cio Sam are appearin really thrilles me!!! Are other opera and ballet chracters going to appear, how will you be connecting their stories wih disney?

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    1. About Calypso, she has nothing to do with the mythological character from the Odyssey. ;).Many characters will appear from Ballet, opera and classics from literature. Even some forgotten Disney characters who most of you cannot imagine ;D.

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    2. OMG This gets better every time!!! Is the Queen of the night, tamino, pamina and papageno from the Magic Flute going to appear, Its my favorite opera!!!!!!

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  73. Is he Argus? He looks evil O.O I thought you weren't putting mitologycal characters, but after Bastet and now Calypso (I think she was a witch in an island). At first I thought Calypso could be the real name of Carpet

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    1. It's normal he looks evil in an odd place like that. He is not pure evil but I think it's obvious he is not a saint ;).

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  74. Maybe Calypso is Snow's mother (I don't think so) but she is the only red haired queen who has like 40 years and we know. ;)

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    1. Great deduction! But sadly you are wrong :(.

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  75. Hey guys! I've just found this amazing blog, take a look. ;) http://www.rejectedprincesses.com/

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    1. I don't understand very well the purpose of that site but it's a funny project xD.

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  76. the raven hair guy always around rose a lot......is he gonna be rose love interest or a body guard for her?........I don't know why there something between those two but thats my opinion. anyone want to help me out please :)

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    1. I'm fairly sure he will become a lover interest to Aurora. The fact that Philip is dead (and he is never coming back) means she will find someone else eventually. Especially since we know she has descendants (like princess eilonwy) So I have two theories, either Aurora is already pregnant with Philip's child or she eventually marries Argus (the raven haired guy) and has kids with him :P

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  77. But is he the REAL Argus?

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  78. Where is Grimhilde? Also does Lady Tremaine have a first name?

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    1. Grimhilde is in Carmilla's palace, with the other villains :D. Yes, Tramaine has a first name ;).

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  79. I'm guessing Calypso is the redhead in the cover :)

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  80. Next update? :D Aurora is in the same world as Snow, Cindy, Belle and Ariel?

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    1. Here you have you update ;). Yes, Aurora is in the same place that them :).

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  81. Definitely I ship them. So hard. So sorry Phillip, but life goes on...

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    1. I think , they look very well-matched. But Phillip died just 3 days ago and Argus is in love with another woman ;).

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  82. It's going to break my heart if Aurora ends up with any other guy. I can't see her with anyone else except Philip. I hope he comes back somehow! Leave me to my denial! Btw doe Aurora ever actually refer to herself as Aurora? Or does she not care for the name and stuck with Rose?

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    1. Sorry to say this but Phillip is dead, he is not going to resurrect or something like that... When someone dies in this comic, dies forever :(. About Argus, he told Aurora that he is already in love with another woman ;). Anyway, I think Aurora deserves to rebuild her life with somebody else :).

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