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Wednesday, 19 November 2014

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Fourteen: The Primeval Man 25/25
































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  1. OMG!!!!
    How dare she, she is horrible, she is a monster, I hate her so much!!!!!

    BTW, I love your story and your drawings, they are so awesome!!!!
    But I hate Berthalda ¬¬

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    1. Do you hate Berthalda? But why? she is such a kind person ;D.

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    2. You got a point there.

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  2. O my goodness she is just pissing me off and I wish she was real so I could slap her!!! This is really good start so far :)

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    1. I am sorry to have to inform you that this is only just the beginning of the Berthalda's movements against Belle ;D.

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    2. O no D: !!! And I have to say Breadfly I love designs and costumes so far in this chapter :)

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  3. Wow. I'm impressed!
    I really don't like Berthalda but I like that she's messing up Belle's life.
    Of course I really like Belle and I feel sorry for her (I would be really angry, if someone called me a courtesan for no reason) but I'm glad to see Berthalda in action. :D
    I'm also glad to see the true face of royal life full of damn and shifty gossips.

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    1. Berthalda has just started to attack Belle's life ;D. The life in France in XVIII century was full of gossips... and most of them were just huge lies from some imaginative tongues.

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    2. Is that mean she has something better for Belle and Ariel? Nice. :D

      And I'm glad you included these gossips in your story. :)

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  4. Wow, this chapter started much earlier than I thought it would. Berthalda is such a bitch. Say Breadfly, who is your favorite princess(es)? Sonne told us his top three, what about you?

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    1. I maintain that Berthalda is such a kind person ;D. About my favorite princesses this is my top three list:
      1st Aurora
      2nd Snow White
      3rd Cinderella.

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  5. Hi Breadfly :) You're doing doing the "What If" alternatives pages. I was wondering if you'll also do something for Vanellope von Schweetz? She is technically a princess ;)

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    1. I think i 'm not going to realize a ''Wreck it Ralph What if'', because that movie is not historical, not even fairytale related, and it would break the main line of this comic.

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    1. The power of gossip is even more powerful than the power of love ;D.

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  7. I am so glad we are seeing more of Belle! And the decadent court dresses of that time.

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    1. Thanks! Finally it's her turn :)

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  8. Do more of ariel, what happened to melody?

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    1. Me too, what about Melody?

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    2. Sorry but I cant tell you what happened to Melody. Ariel will appear in this chapter ;D.

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  9. This comic always know how to keep me on the edge of my seat whether it's during action, shocking, or just tear jerking moments. Also, it's really cool that we get to finally see a Belle-centric chapter. I know she appeared and is one of the main characters but I didn't realize that she kinda disappeared before and stayed kinda quiet while the other girls were facing trouble. But I'm so excited to see more from this chapter!

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    1. You're probably not the only one xD

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  11. Is Hilda Red Riding Hood? Or is this just a reference?

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    1. It's just a reference, Hilda is not the little riding hood.

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  12. Yeah, who is Hilda?

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    1. I can't tell you what character is Hilda because she is a mix of several fairytale characters and stories.

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  13. She is the little girl from Grimm's version of Snow White and the seven dwarfs! She came the third day, after two old seller ladies, and she gave SW the apple!!!

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    1. Sorry but she is not a Snow White related character :(.

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  14. Ok, that was... unexpected??!! Gosh I love this story!!

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    1. That's because Hilda is an unexpected character ;D.

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  15. Errrr.... It seems Hilda has a little secret...

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  16. HOLY S- FUCK YOU LITTLE RED FUCKING RIDING HOOD!

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    1. Poor Hilda. She did nothing wrong (yet...)

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  17. HA HA The BEAST is hungry!!! xD

    Feed it....then kill it with FIRE!!!!

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    1. That would be a bad idea, fire doesn't affect to monster Hilda.

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    2. *gasp* a monster you can't kill with fire 0__0
      It's the end of times....run for your life!!!

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  18. Mon....MONSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *running away from the computer*

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    1. She is not a monster, just an obese furby xD.

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    2. Oh sorry... Hum... Ob....OBESE FURBY!!!!!

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  19. Is Pocahontas going to appear???

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    1. Yes, she will appear( John Smith and John Rolfe will appear too)

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    2. This story is getting more awesome every time I see it. :D

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    3. Hope Pocahontas stays with Smith and not Rolfe lol!

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    4. The story of Pocahontas in this series will be really scandalous ;D.

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  20. I'm confused. Is Quetzal (hope I spelled it right) supposed to say "I can let you eat her, or "I can't"? She just helped Aurora. Right? At least, for this one time.

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  21. Oooh soo interesting...wonder what's gonna happen. Quetzal looks beautiful btw.

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  22. So I guess Hilda represents...Gluttony?

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  23. So, It's Quetzal an allie or an enemy?
    Or this "help" is part of a more complex evil plan?

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  24. Hilda is a bitch...I love it!

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  25. Quetzal is so pretty and powerful! I wonder why is she helping Aurora... Maybe self-interests?

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    1. Not exactly... It's something long and hard to explain.

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  26. Omg Adam's a jerk! I wanna punch him in the face -_-

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    1. I dont think he is a jerk, he just doesn't know how to manage that situation.

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    2. True. And quick question will Mulan also be in a future chapter?

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    3. what of la Esmeralda?

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  27. I knew this would happen sooner or later... ToT

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    1. Well... Belle and Adam used to discuss frequently in the movie too, they have strong personalities.

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  28. In these last pages Belle is just...too...damn...BADASS 0.0 I loved it!

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  29. Well then.....Belle and Adam's happily ever after isn't going very well now is it :P

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    1. That's the point of this story xD

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  30. So the primeval man is Gaston! Then, I'm sure he'll appear in this chapter, this will be very interesting!

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  31. I'm not surprised. It's perfectly normal for couples to argue. These two argued a lot in the movie as well. Its only natural this story would have their marriage hitting a rough patch. I get why Belle is upset but I think Adam was right about being over-dramatic when she compared him to Gaston.

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    1. Exactly, that was the intention. Both characters have strong personalities (and little patience) and the situation had got totally out of hand.

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  32. What wrong with belle? What happened to ariel

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  33. Where is the first chapter?

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    1. Check the section "chapters" on the top :)

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  34. En el anterior capitulo Blancanieves parece como mas mayor. ¿Por qué? ¿Es un rediseño como el de Rose Red? Esta mejor asi, pues en los muy primeros capitulos parecia demasiado joven. Por cierto en su character profile tambien aparece como mas joven pero una cosa que me intriga es como mide tan poco si se supone que es de la estatura de Ariel. Lo editaréis? ;)

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    1. Sí, hacía falta rediseñar ambas. Respecto a la altura, sí que la editaremos, aunque tampoco es algo muy vital xD

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  35. A partir de ahora Blancanieves aparecera como rn el anterior capitulo? Mas madura? Pues en los primeros capitulos parecia muy joven. ;)

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    1. Sí, y será modificada en los anteriores también.

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    2. En un comentario he oido que aparte del rediseño de Rose Red tambien ibais a poner a Blanca pelirroja. PD: el pelirrojo oscuro es mi color favorito, solo que si se lo poneis quedaria un poco raro no? XD

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    3. No, no vamos a poner a Blancanieves pelirroja. Es solo que un anonimo se confundio con los rediseños de Rose Red y Bñancanieves, pero no vamos a cambiarle a Blancanieves su color de pelo original. Seria algo bastante ilogico por nuestra parte :D.Por favor los comentarios en español ponedlos en el capitulo en español si no es mucha molestia... Sino se genera mucho caos con los mensajes. El pelirrojo tambien es mi color de pelo favorito ;D.

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  36. That girl near Maleficient silouette in the background is Aurora or Snow White?

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    1. None of them. She is Queen Grimhilde. ;D

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    2. Oh, is strange to see her with long hair. XD

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    3. She always had long hair. You can see her with long hair when she drinks the potion in her laboratory on the original movie ;D.

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  37. When will you post the new pages? :D

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  38. Where Esmeralda? I say where?

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  39. Gosh I seriously love the way Snow White looks :D
    She never was my favorite, but this comic makes me love her ^_^

    I also REALLY love the way you guys are drawing the eyes now!!
    There is so much detail and it's really pretty :)

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    1. I'm really happy that you have noticed about the eyes. I've created new realistic eyes to all the characters :D.

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  40. The main villains that scare me the most in this story has to be Carmilla and Maleficent because for Carmilla I believe she's going to flirt or make a move on Ariel then try kill her probably. Not to mention you wanna believe that she's good but she's rlly evil. And with Maleficent...idk I've just been scared of her since I was a kid. So quick question (im sorry i ask so much questions) for Cinderella's hair is that a highlight in her hair or a ribbon in it?

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    1. Maleficent always scared me when I was a child too. She has something insidious in her eyes. About Cinderella's hair, she is wearing a ribbon, not a highlight ;D.

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  41. I love this story! So classy and interesting ^^
    Snow White's new design is amazing! She looks flawless, truly the fairest of them all :3
    You're doing a great job! :D

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    1. That was our intention when we redesinged her ;D.
      Thanks for commenting ;D.

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  42. Will we ever get an evil queen backstory?

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  43. Are you guys still working on redesigning the earlier chapters?

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  44. Will we see Jasmine in this chapter?

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  45. The thing that Snow's mother wants Rose Red to give her, is the necklace that appears in some picture with Cindy, Aurora, Maleficient and the other boy in DeviantArt???

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  46. WOW! Snow can do magic?!

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  47. .............I just died how gorgeous Snow White is.

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  48. Do you plan to have Gaston appear later on, if he doesn't appear in this chapter? I know Pocahontas and Mulan will appear, but so far I've only seen the female villains (Or maybe a male villain appeared already? I don't think so, but I haven't read the previous chapters in a long time, so I can't say for sure ^-^) Anyways, I love the Snow White and Cinderlla moments. For some reason, I find them...I dunno...adorable? I guess it's because their personalities match so well, haha xD. Speaking of personalities, it seems like the marriage isn't doing too well at the moment for Belle and Adam. What will Ariel do if Belle leaves? Gah, there's to much drama in that time.

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    1. Ariel will go to the Village with Belle ;D, don't worry about her. Cinderella and Snow White are absolutely perfect when they are together (L).

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    2. i have a feeling when it comes to the final battle at the end of the series Snow White and Cinderella are gonna b partners

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  49. So Snow White was the healer that Merlin said in the previous chapter??

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  50. Are Snow White's eyes gold b/c of the magic she now has?

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    1. Her eyes were always gold. :P

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    2. But aren't they brown in the movie?

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    3. In the movie, they were like brownish or honey. But in the comic, she always had gold eyes.

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    4. Sonne has said he likes to make their eye colors vibrant and really pop. So that's why her eyes are gold colored. It's just his interpretation.

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    5. Oh ok, I was just curious! I now love the combination of dark hair, fair skin, and gold eyes.

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    6. I know right!!! I never was a big fan of Snow White, but I LOVE her in this comic. She really is the fairest of them all :)

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    7. I've loved Snow White since I was a child and it was the most special movie for me. She has a innocence that any Disney princess can duplicate. I am happy because in this comic Snow White is one of people's favorite princesses and her oppinions in people are not an annoying girl. She was only 14 years old!!. She and Cinderella are my favourite disney characters because thay had the courage to go on, even in the bad moments. This princesses can teach kids good manners, ( Belle too) not that annoying little girl personality of Ariel, for example. I only want to say that these characters that are not the typical "famous ones", are the more "human" characters" that Disney has ever made and they have to be more important.

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  51. What are the odds that you will publish it as a graphic novel once it is completed? I would totally buy it!

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    1. We will publish it ;D.(they will be non-profit books, so it will cost just the price of the book itself) As this story will be really long, it will be divided into different books.

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    2. The cover, I am sure will be gorgeous!

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    3. You should also include the little bios of each of the characters. Maybe also the little funny cartoons at the end of the book along with snippets of the original pages (as concept art) to show how the art has changed, and the references to other Disney stuff.

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  52. In the principal picture, with the princesses and alice, wendy, etc. Why is Snow in a gold apple? Because the one I know is from Maleficient. Or is only because you like it???

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    1. The golden apple is not from Maleficent, It belongs to Carmilla ;D. I can't tell you anymore about it, sorry :(.

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    2. Can you say if it has a relative meaning to the story or was it just because you wanted to put her in the apple?

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    3. Everything has its own meaning :)

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    4. Snow White has yet to meet Carmilla but clearly there is a connection. There is a reason why they look so alike. The apple in the header is another proof of this. Snow's mother must have known her since Carmilla has befriended Rose Red but the grandmother is not happy about it.

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  53. How many days have passed since the beginning of the comic in each kingdom of the princesses???

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    1. Aurora: 5 days
      Snow White: 3 days
      Cinderella: 1 day in her kingdom and 2 days in Snow White's kingdom.
      Ariel: 1 day in her kingdom and 2 days in Adam's castle.
      Belle: 2 days.
      Jasmine: 3 days.

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  54. Is Belle pregnant???

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    1. Wouldn't it be hard to sword fight with Adam then?

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  55. Have you seen the movie "Anastasia" from Century Fox?

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  56. Oooh King of Gutenberg! Was that a kingdom from 16th century Germany?

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    1. Gutenberg is a little old town of Germany. The King introduces himself as '' The King of Gutenberg'' because that is the fictitious name of Germany in this comic series( This is a comic with too many worlds who have been inspired in real countries, and it's really necessary to give to these kingdoms and countries fictitious names, because otherwise we would have 3 United Kingdom, 2 Frances and 2 Germanies...

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    2. Oooh that is smart. Which princesses live in the UK, France, and Germany? I know Cinderella and Belle are French, Wendy and Alice are English, and Snow White is German. I'm guessing you labeled Aurora as the third UK princess or 2nd German one??

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  57. Ariel has the most beautiful eyes in there! Snow and Cindy too, but this is the first time I've really ever looked at Ariel's eyes!

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    1. That's because I have created new and more realistic eyes for all the characters in this chapter ;D. Ariel eyes are bigger than the others ones, so it's really understandable that you draw your attention to them ;D.

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    2. The color is really pretty - light blue. I was expecting a color more like on the header/front page where she has seafoam green eyes.

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  58. Thank you very much. It was worth the wait

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  59. Usually my favorite Disney man is John Smith... But I have to admit that your version of Frederick is pretty handsome... You're lucky, miss Snow White.

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  60. Yes the prince is very handsome! Much better than in the actual movie imo (he always seemed a bit chubby lol)

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    1. I think Frederick was the one who needed a new redesign more urgently xD.

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    2. Snow White's prince was supposed to have a larger role in the film but the animators at the time did not have enough experience with animating and drawing men. So he was reduced to being a convenient tool. I find that their difficulty with the prince does show in the way he was drawn.

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  61. Ohhh I see two hidden mickey's on this new page :D

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    1. Two? I can only see one, on the lock, the third panel.

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    2. There are two hidden mickeys in the new page :D.

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    3. Try looking up in the sky ;)

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    4. Oh! I see it now! Thanks for your help! :D

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  62. So....Maurice now lives in the castle? He's still there while Belle left with Ariel?

    I wonder how that rose got there....;)

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    1. I think that Belle would never want to be separated of her father and Maurice is also an elder man, he can't live all alone in a cottage, in the same way he can't walk between the snow in the middle of winter following his daughter and Ariel. That could be dangerous for a mature man like him.
      You will know more about the rose in this chapter ;D.

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  63. I have to say that I'm totally impressed, not just by the story but the art. I've been following this story from the very beginning and I still have saved lots of original pages from previous chapters on my laptop. The improving in the art until this day is absolutely gorgeous and looks even better with each new chapter. Thank you so much for let us enjoy this amazing story with such a wonderful art.
    Greetings!

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  64. Gaston? Is that he?

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  65. In Cinderella III, whenever someone mentions the word "love" around Lady Tremaine, she gets pretty mad. Will that be referenced in this story or does it have something to do with her backstory?

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    1. Sorry but CInderella III is not a valid sequel in this comic. It's incompatible with this comic. It was an entertaining movie, but it's impossible to combine with this story ;D.

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    2. So Anastasia will be bad like in the first movie???

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    3. Not necessarily. She will be just ''different'' :D.

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  66. Is their any symbolism behind the colors of the roses from Chapter 12 and from this chapter?

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  67. Will Carmilla appear in this chapter??? :3

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  68. Hey, Sonne or Breadfly! Do you play any video game? ;)

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    1. Of course! I play dragon age, Skyrim, Final fantasy (the old ones), the pupeteer.... I love survival horror games, my favorite videogame is ''Rule of Rose'', but Clocktower and Haunting Ground are very good games too :D. Sonne prefers Tomb raider (the old ones) and resident evil (the old ones too).

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  69. Oh, no!!! Not Berthalda againa!!!!
    Hate her so much

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  70. Ooooh! Berthalda is back! Interesting... :3

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  71. Why hello there Gaston! :D
    Love Berthalda

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  72. I think something big is going to happen right now..

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  73. Ohhh. Ohhhhh. It is that Berthalda bitch again...Belle will slap her silly. This I know.

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  74. I think I really love Berthalda... She is the bitch of my dreams.

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  75. Well..that answers my previous question about Gaston xD

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  76. So Bethalda turned Gaston into a purple people eater? XD!

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    1. What is a purple eater? I dont know what are you talking about :O.

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    2. There's an old novelty song back in 1958 that hit #1 called "The Purple People Eater" by Sheb Wooley about "A one eyed, one horned, flying purple people eater" who comes to Earth to play in a rock and roll band. Truthfully, the monster may not actually be purple but merely eats purple people--it's a bit unclear.

      Basically because Gaston is purple, I am joking around that this is basically what he is--a purple people eater. Well, that, and the villagers appear to be missing. Perhaps Gaston ate them. XD.

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  77. I change my mind about Berthalda. She scares me. I haven't been this scared since I saw Smaug in the third movie in theaters.

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    1. Berthalda knows very well how to be really spooky :D.

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  78. The golden apple in the banner is the apple of discord?

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    1. It is a combination of the apple of discord and the goldeen apples of The Garden of the Hesperides ;D.

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  79. Sailor Jupiter just came to save the day!!! :D

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