WARNING

The following story contains graphic violence and nudity not suitable for anyone.
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Thursday, 22 August 2013

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Nine: The Unborn Grave 17/17






















228 comments:

  1. I think Aurora's gone to the dark side... She doesn't seem... pure to me anymore...

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    1. She has a hard moment...

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    2. I guess after seeing someone die for the first time, and also the fact that it's her husband, she's become in a way stronger?

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    3. It's a little more complicated :)

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  2. In the movie, Aurora was talking to her animal friends about her dreaming(Once Upon A Dream)of spending some quality time with a man(Phillip). And when she wakes up, he's gone. I also thought she was dreaming that when she was under the sleeping curse. And when the curse broke, he was here this time! Looks like I thought wrong...

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  3. Are we gonna see Snow White's suffering in "Slave In The Mirror" or this Chapter?

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    1. Is there going to be a "Slave In The Mirror II" like how Aurora and Cinderella got 2 Chapters of their own?

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  4. This is not the Aurora I know. This must be an impostor!

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    1. The Aurora we knew died with Phillip...

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  5. Aurora... Revenge is never the answer... But justice is righteous!

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    1. If she really can tell the difference right now...

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  6. The cover of this chapter is GORGEOUS!!! My favorite by far :D

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  7. I think Aurora's gone insane for some reason... O.O

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    1. for some reason??? maybe because her husband EXPLODED!!

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  8. I have a feeling we won't see Cinderella for a while...

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  9. Aurora better not die of starvation...

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  10. The parents finally come! Snow White's parents have passed, Belle has her father(Maurice), Aurora has both her parents, Cinderella's parents have also passed, Ariel's mother died but she still has her father(King Triton, King Of The Sea), and Jasmine's mother passed but she also has her father(The Sultan). Geez, the parents are pretty useless for some reason...

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    1. Well, at least they have a little appearance.

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  11. Have you posted this Chapter in your Fan Club yet?

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    1. No, but I don't have hurry. The activity in the Club is very low and I'll delete it probably one day. I did the club only because there were people uploading the pages without my permission...

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  12. When will you post a new page? :)

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  13. hi!!! I love your comic, is dark and the storyline is amazing. I saw one of your draws, and Alice was in it. So she will appear, and as I can see, Merlin probably will appear too. So this story is not only about princesses... in that case, will Peter Pan appear? he's one of my favourite Disney males and Alice/Peter is my favourite crossover :)
    congratulations for your job!!

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    1. Thanks! And yes, Peter Pan and Wendy will appear.

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  14. Is it me; or are Aurora's eyes a tad more purple than normal? Could it be that Maleficent is still lurking inside?

    Great job as always!

    ~lordsnoopy

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    1. Thanks! No, Aurora's reactions are in that way for another reason.

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  15. Sonne, you are just pure evil(I mean that in a good way).

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  16. Will Aurora change back?

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  17. hmmm I wonder who the mysterious man is?! Based on his silhouette, it's not Phillip...he has long hair, so maybe it is Adam or Frederick...wait!! what if it's Gaston?!? lol or maybe I'm reading into it too much and he doesn't even matter to the story...or does he?! >:)

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    1. He is not a Disney character, he is one of the characters I created for this story :)

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    2. Ohh so it's the guy with long black hair on you DA!! Awesome, I can't wait to see his part in the story :D

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  18. That man must be the one the faeries mentioned. The one who could travel between worlds. They said he wouldn't hurt Aurora so she's safe...

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    1. No, he's not that man. Besides this is a dream, not another world.

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  19. Wanna see some flashbacks in your awesome web comic. And while re-reading your series I realised that your every page is filled with unanswered questions so please try to answer them please before it turns becoming confused :/ but love it ;) wanna see flashback with Snow's Mother, wanna see Ariel turning into a mermaid, Tangled characters, Maleficent young and ... GO on! It's wonderful!

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    1. Thanks! But every question will be answered in the right time, it's part of the plot :)

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    2. Happy to here that.:)Btw sorry for the bad English and don't forget about thinking doing flashbacks, if they fit on your storylines plans, any case of Philip returnig somehow? Even after many chapters the princesses win in this nightmare Aurora won't never be able to be happy again :/ first comic that makes me think like that:P this proofs you are pure talent. xD if this was a comic i will surly buy it

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  20. Snow White is so sweet!!! I really never liked her and I think she looks kind of... ugly in her movie, but here she is incredibly beautiful, with long hair and brown/yellow eyes, and her personality is adorable and cute but not silly like in the movie. I feel so sorry for Aurora and the Kings and Queen :(
    Love your comic!!!

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    1. Thanks! I know Snow White is a character very undervalued for many people, they considerate her too innocent(she was a child after all) or silly. For that reason I was looking to offer a image more mature of her, with the same sweetness but more responsible.

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    2. I agree that she is undervalued, i would know 'cause i get a bit nervous telling people that she is my favorite disney princess, besides, it's been said that she was just 14 years old in her movie and im not sure why but i always loved her singing voice. That and i really like what you have done with these characters, its wonderful! Keep it up! ;) <3

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  21. I love the way you draw & color Snow's face on this chapter's cover. She looks like a (broken) porcelain doll, & at first glance, I find it quite creepy but after some time & a closer look, it's actually gorgeous!! I also love the lily flowers on the cover!

    BTW, in the dream scene where Aurora says the line "No. He is always there. He never talks to me. And I never talk to him.", her face actually looks like she's been being punched like in a wrestling match (I'm sorry). Other than that, the rest is great though :)

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    1. Thanks! The lily flowers are the representation of the cementery in this chapter. Poor Aurora, her face it's more like "I don't really want your company or this conversation" xD.

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  22. Aurora knew what Snow White was thinking. Wait, does that mean Aurora can read minds now?! O.O

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    1. No o.o, Aurora is aware of how cold she is being with Snow White.

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  23. Is that man in page 9, Phillip?

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  24. I have a feeling Aurora's going to attack Snow White.

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    1. I don't think so but it's interesting give you that impression ._.

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    2. poor Snow!!! why would Aurora do that? she's on a hard moment but it's not Snow White's fault :(

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  25. Oh! I love Snow in this scene *-*....and I think I know who the mysterious man is....that long-black-haired man with green eyes you showed months ago =)

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  26. Snow white is represented by an apple, Cinderella is represented by her glass slipper, Aurora by a spinning wheel but, What about Ariel, Belle and Jasmine?

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    1. The only symbols for the title are the three classic princesses.

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    2. Ariel is represented by a scallop seashell, like the ones she used as her purple scallop seashell bra when she's in mermaid form; Belle is represented by the Beast's enchanted (red) rose; Jasmine is represented by Genie's magic lamp.

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  27. Cool!!!! What programm are you using?

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  28. When will your next update be? -^_^-

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  29. NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! WHY MUST IT BE THE INNOCENT CHILD CHARACTER???!!!

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    1. Life is hard. Besides it's a warning(at least for now).

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  30. What will happen to Aurora now?

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    1. Continue following the story and you`ll know it :)

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  31. Wow! I love how Snow's dress turned black just as the storyline blackened further.

    Excellent job!

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  32. "There." THERE?! Aurora is incredibly cold with Snow White!!! she saved her life when Phillip was going to kill her in the nightmare!!
    And OMG, Rosie is too cute and young for die!! Phillip it's OK, Alphonse is OK, but Rose Red how old is she? 3? 4? She's too young and adorable :(

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    1. Yes, it's not fair, but it's a hard life :(

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  33. I've had it in mind to ask you this question for a while now. Are you looking for other artist's to help you with this comic? You update very fast, considering you work on your own. I was just curious to ask :) Also great job with the story so far, I love it - good luck!!

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    1. No, it's all my work. I had many pages of this chapter made time ago, that's the reason of this speed :)

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    2. Nice :) I can't wait to see what happens next :D

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  34. The next page better not be a dead Rose Red. I think it's just gonna be Rosie missing from her bed.

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  35. I really love the way you're showing a different side of the princess. That is the kind of 'sequel' disney should do. lol <3

    Sorry for the English. I am still learning...

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  36. Oh nooo not Rose Red >_< Maybe the fact that Snow White got a sign with the tombstone means she could try to change the future and alter her daughters fate!! I really hope so.....

    But at the same time, altering the future can have a different negative outcome. Like you could save one life, but another life could be taken...or worse things can happen too.

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  37. Woah that's cruel...poor Snow White! :c

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    1. Yes, it is, but it's a signal not a fact.

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  38. When will you post a new page? :)

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  39. Snow White looks pretty serious in the first panel of page 14. I'm glad you gave her that sense of maturity and responsibility. :)

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    1. She's a queen and mother after all :)

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  40. Rose Red's birthday? I'm pretty sure Snow White's life is gonna be damaged before that happens.

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  41. Really, Snow?! You go alone?! Armed without a weapon or guards?! And you didn't even bring Frederick with you?! Oh, wow?! >:|

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    1. I don' think she's gonna enter at the mysterious room... Now she's brave, but not stupid... Anyway, if Rose is safe without the key, how will she die? o.O
      Hey Aurora!!! Ya lost ur husband! Why don't ya cry a little bit?! Why doesn't she cry? :(

      And hey Sonne!! I love ur fanart of Merida! It's wonderful ^^ I love her because she's from Scotland, like me :)

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    2. Thanks!
      But we don't know if that key was the reason of Rose Red's death...

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  42. Lo pondré en español porque me estoy muriendo. Siento que algo se le va a aparecer por detrás a Blanca Nieves y pum! Adiós. Y por qué tienes que hacer que Rosie muera :c ?

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    1. Que dramático ._.
      Rosie no ha muerto, es una advertencia, pero parece que ha provocado el pánico entre los lectores xD.

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    2. Y como no! Muy padre. Estudias diseño en animación o algo?

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    3. No, soy ilustrador a secas :)

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    4. Y por que no comentas en el capitulo en Español tambien lo hay? te lo digo por si no lo sabias espero que no te lo tomes a malas :)

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    5. Creo que se refiere a mí por comentar en español. Me gusta leer en inglés, perdón por el comentario en español .____. Muy buen trabajo! No me esperaba ver a la Reina así, pero está bastante bien.
      Ilustrador a secas..? Tienes mucho talento c:

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  43. I have 3 guesses about what's behind the door:
    1. The Evil Queen
    2. The Evil Queen In Hag Form
    3. The Magic Mirror
    It's gotta be one of these! :D

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  44. Aurora has talked with Maleficent.
    Cinderella has talked with her step-mother.
    Then Snow white now will talk with the evil queen.

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  45. Aw yeah! Go Snowhite! Kick some witch ass!

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  46. My money is on the Magic Mirror :D

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  47. Why is the evil queen naked?

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    1. Because she's worth it

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    2. She is a vain character so when she recovers her beauty, she admires herself(as far as this story is more adult and real.

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    3. Well yes, but I think the Evil Queen admires her face more rather than her body. Because normally, the face has much more influence on a person's attractiveness than the body has. Some people might be actually feel bothered by her exposed nipple. So I'll love it more if you cover her shown nipple with her hair. But then again, it's all up to you whether you want to change it or not. And of course, because you already warned that this story is adult-oriented. Overall, great page though :)

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    4. In the Disney version maybe it's true , but in an adult reality, the fairest one of them all must have a perfect face as long a beautiful body(like any classic Goddess). Anyway, this nude is artistic so I don't see any problem with her exposed nipple, and as you said this is not for children :)
      Besides, I think it's so much worse Phillip's death (for example) than an elegant nude scene.

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    5. Well, there's an unwritten rule that forbids people to see a person's "private area" (unless if they're married); yet there's no rule that forbids people to see a person's end of life.

      And yes, it is elegant and artistic.

      BTW, since when Maleficent has such twinkling eyes? Because no Disney Villains have twinkling eyes. The twinkling eyes are only possessed by the Disney protagonists.

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    6. That's because in animation we see the characters in continuous movement, so the twinkling eyes is not a must have. But a comic is made with statics images so if I don't put any shine inside all the character's eyes(except some particular cases or situations) their gaze will look empty and dead.

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  48. i've been reading this comic and its epic.
    i hope rosie doesn't die, it'll be sad.
    i hope aurora takes up the sword of truth and uses it to fight maleficent and her forces.

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    1. your welcome

      if i may ask, would all the princess get together after there "Deaths"?

      its very interesting

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    2. Of course, all of them will be together in the future and during the rest of the story.

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    3. neat. I take it they'll band together with weapons and stuff and use it to slay there enemies.

      Princess Revenge!! LOL XD

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  49. I didn't know there would be nudity in this comic. Gross! Can you at least censor it?! This is way too far! :/

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    1. If I don't censore the blood, why the artistic nudity? And how old are you for thinking like that?

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    2. lol I know right!! If you think it is "GROSS" to see a nude woman, you're too young to be read this comic!!

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  50. Whoa, Hello Evil Queen!! You're looking pretty sexy over there xD
    So are we sure Snow White is the fairest of them all? Because the Queen it looking very "fair" :) lol

    Don't mind the negativity towards the Evil Queen being nude and exposed. It is artistic and in absolutely no way "offensive or pornographic"...you are an artist and can express yourself however you please. If anyone dislikes it, that is their problem. You don't need to change a thing, in my opinion.

    Well done, I love the additional adult theme to your story ^_^

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    1. Thanks a lot ^^
      Honestly, I'm so surprised about these reactions from adult people complaining for a simple artistic nude when they have seen lots of blood in the story so far. So monsters and blood are cool but a beautiful representation of the female beauty is gross...?
      Anyway I put a warning because this fact,so they can't complain since now ;)

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    2. Yeah that's a smart thing to do :)
      I noticed it right away when I opened the home page.

      I am surprised too!! It's like come on people, I thought it was pretty obvious this is an Adult Comic. Not only because of the violence and blood, but in Chapter 3 you see Ariel wake up from bed after having sex with Eric!! and OMG, yes I did just say SEX!!! XD haha

      Anyway, really I love what you did and I hope to see more artistic nudity. It is beautiful and you did a great job depicting the Evil Queen's vanity. I finally understand why she thought she was the most beautiful in the land!! She gorgeous, it just made me like her more. But Maleficent is still my #1 favorite villain, but Evil Queen just got spot #2 :)

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    3. Thanks! Of course there will be more artistic nudity(as far as it will be more blood xD), both men and women.

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  51. I hope Grimhilde gets a new dress too, right? :D

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  52. Will the enchantress from Beauty and the Beast ever be seen? I know you've mentioned her, so it just makes me wonder.

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    1. Ooohhhh!!! I wonder which side she'll be on, the princess or the villain? Or maybe she'll be nutural!

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  53. Your shading on page fifteen is absolutely gorgeous! Well done.

    I wish I could shade that well; just have to keep practicing I guess. ;)

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  54. I always wondered if Grimhilde was naked under that black cloak. XD Now I just want to know what's under Maleficent's cloak.

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  55. Why is Grimhilde so surprised about Rose Red? O.O

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  56. I guess Mally had no idea that the Magic Mirror is bound to tell the truth only. The reason that Snow declared as "Fairest of All" is because she's beautiful both on the outside & on the inside. While Grimhilde is only beautiful on the outside.

    BTW, does Grimhilde & Mally's alliance (and possibly bond) is based on their goals & objectives (and possibly hidden motives) or, even though rarely, from a real friendship?

    Oh, and if you have plans to give the Magic Mirror a dialogue, make sure you already think of poems, because it speaks in rhymes.

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    1. The true reason why the mirror chose Snow White as the fairest one is because she has the gift of youthness, not for her inside beauty.
      I know the Magic Mirror speaks in rhymes, it will be complicated but I'll do my best.

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    2. Technically, being the fairest means having the whitest skin(not trying to be racist here). And believe me, in the original movie, Snow White's skin wasn't that white to me.

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  57. Hey Grimhilde, why so mad?!? It seemed like she was more angry about the name "Rose Red" then the fact that Snow White has a daughter...

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    1. She is more angry about the name for good reasons :)

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    2. Ahhh, I thought so :) I got that vibe from her reaction!! ^^

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  58. I think the reason Grimhilde is angry about Rose Red is that she's going to be the next fairest. ;)

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  59. Here's my thought about why Grimhilde is angry: Rose Red was a princess(or a sister of Snow White's)who was orginally "The Fairest One Of All" but was killed. However, Rose Red's spirit was sent into Snow White's daughter. Now, Rose Red is secretly in Snow White's daughter's body to protect her. Do you like my prediction? :)

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    1. It's interesting but it's a little more complicated. However I like the idea :)

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  60. Bit more technical question: why can't I download your last page as an image? Only as a webpage?

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  61. dang, i don't like how grimhilde responded to the name rose red, does she know Rose's her stepdaughter's daughter

    btw i'm on DA too

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    1. No, she didn't know the girl but that name means something important for her, that's for sure ;)

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  62. maybe Grimhilde is angry because now she is a "stepgrandmother" and she feels old XD

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  63. Hey Sonne! Someone in DA is making a poor copy of your comic... Maybe you should take a look...

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    1. Sonne, if you find it, please tell me what it's called. I want to know what it looks like.

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    2. I spent an hour on the DA comic section, looking for the copy and couldn't find it. Is identical to this story? About the Disney Princesses but different art? If you could give us the name of the DA account, that would be a big help. Thanks.

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  64. I spent an hour on the DA comic section, looking for the copy and couldn't find it. Is identical to this story? About the Disney Princesses but different art? If you could give us the name of the DA account, that would be a big help. Thanks.

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    1. I coudn't find anything ._.

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    2. Yeah it would help if the person who saw it could give us a link or something. That way you can determine if it is an identical copy or not. And if it is, we totally have your back Sonne!! :)

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  65. When will you post more pages? :)

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  66. I think I have found the person who is copying your work Sonne:
    http://kirahkingley.deviantart.com/art/The-cover-by-Chapter-One-384200603
    She as a comic with another disney characters, with scenes exactly as yours as the same as some cover concepts and more...
    Can I bite her?
    She is in deviant art and blogger:
    http://kirahkingley.deviantart.com/art/The-cover-by-Chapter-One-384200603

    http://cruceseneldestinodeunabruja.blogspot.com.es/

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    1. Don't mind that. It's only a fan comic made by a fan. Obviously it has a strong influence from my work, but it doesn't matter to me.

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    2. Ok,But I cant help to be angry with that person, it's not fair, it's your work an nobody must copy it. Since my own point of view that person is despicable and uncreative.

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    3. I read through it too. It seems like it has a similar idea, but I wouldn't call it a copy. A copy would be if it had the same characters or if that story was word for word identical to this one. The only similarity between the two is that it's about different character, from different worlds that will probably fight together against the villains. It's a very generic genre. So I would say it really isn't copying this one.

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  67. When are you going to start on the next chapter? I can hardly wait! The gruesome-ness, and I mean it in a good way, is unbelievably fantastic, it's not too much, and not too little! Great job really!

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  68. Hmmm...what could the Evil Queen's problem be with the name Rose Red...I'm thinking either the queen had a daughter named Rose Red that died (possibly) or maybe the Queen's name was Rose Red (before Grimhilde)....but I don't think Snow would name her daughter after her mean stepmother.....ahhh soo many thoughts in my head xD I can't wait to find out the reason why in the future!! :)

    Ohh Snow White, why did you go in there alone >_< But I really doubt the magic mirror will hurt her. Even in the original movie I kind felt like the magic mirror wasn't a bad guy (even though he has a menacing look) and he always told the truth. I think the magic mirror will help Snow White. I also loved the way he called her the queen!! Good rhyming too :)

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    1. Good theories :). We'll see the answer someday. I don't think the magic mirror is evil, he is more neutral after all.

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    2. heehee ^^ I love how your comic keeps us guessing :) Not many stories do that anymore. They are all very predictable. Whenever I see an update I get so excited xD

      Yeah, he was just forced to work for the evil queen but that doesn't make him evil. He is like a double-edged sword :)

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  69. Is the next chapter still focused on both Snow & Aurora??

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    1. No, it will be focused on Snow, Ariel and Jasmine.

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  70. Yay! Now, Snow White can know about everything! The villains, the deaths, the plan, etc. :D

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  71. "Good night, Grimhilde." MALEFICENT SLEEPS?! Wow...

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    1. It's a greeting but of course she sleeps. She said it in the movie.

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  72. I'm guessing Snow White will have to speak in rhymes too...

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    1. Please no , it's so hard for me xD.

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  73. I heard The Magic Mirror is the spirit of Queen Grimhilde's father. Is that true?

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    1. If you meant the one in the Disney novel, "Fairest of All: A Tale of the Wicked Queen", written by Serena Valentino, then yes, it's true. He has a strong negative influence on the Queen and the main reason why she become the villainous woman that we all know as shown in the 1937 film.

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  74. Off topic question, Do you like the show Sofia the First? :)

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    1. No...Actually, I find it so silly even for little girls...

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    2. I like it when The Disney Princesses guest star in that show. The princesses teach good morals to Sofia and the viewers. So far, only Cinderella and Jasmine guest-starred. Belle and Aurora are coming soon.

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    3. Maybe, but I don't like their CGI designs.

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    4. Their CGI designs are their redesigns. Would you like it better if they used their old designs?

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  75. Even Queen Grimhilde has some secrets of her own... O.O

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  76. Sonne, how Evil Queen already alive again after she died? :/

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    1. And I want to see Belle and Ariel that they will talk about themselves and Belle may help her to find Melody.

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    2. Well, Maleficent and Ursula were dead too. There're good reasons for their return to life, but we'll know them in the future. Soon we'll have more scenes between Ariel and Belle :)

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  77. OH MY! Queen Grimhilde is so nice when she naked.. How about men? I wish I could see them to be naked.. :D Good work :)

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