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Sunday, 30 June 2013

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Eight: Broken Glass II 21/21



























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  1. Is that Jasmine in page 6?! I also hope this doesn't take you a month either.

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    1. Yes, she is. I usually do one chapter per month if I have free time.

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  2. NOOOOOOOO!!! DON'T LET THE RAVENS(or crows)TURN YOU INTO A MONSTER!!! C'MON CINDY, USE THE BEAUTY FROM INSIDE OR YOUR "VIRTUE OF KINDNESS" TO STOP EVIILLL!!!!!!!!!

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  3. Please don't tell me Rose Red is going to open that door with that key and see The Old Hag, The Evil Queen, or something else bad. And please don't tell me that butterfly is a trap. By the way, where is Jasmine? She's usually in an area filled with sand.

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    1. You'll see that in chapter nine. Jasmine is in the garden of the palace.

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  4. Oh yes,Jasmine is appearanced!Great Chapter.It gets better by chapter and chapter,i get so existing.Great!:D

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  5. Hmm...Maleficent in Agrabah...interesting and scary too...XD

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  6. Snow White could be better watch her little daughter...because once Red Rose may be disappear by an Evil witch....

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    1. She has a really inquisitive daughter.

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  7. Why does Maleficent need Cinderella's glass slipper? I mean, it's got it's charms, but it's just a shoe. Does it have some kind of magical power?

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    1. You will know in the future(it's part of the main plot) but that's not a ordinary shoe.

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    2. Just a really mystic,magic shoe can be really important for Maleficent....I'm curious about what kind of magical power have that glass slipper.But,how these shoes (flyies?) in to Jasmine's garden?

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    3. It must have a..."SPIRIT"XD!

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  8. Isn't Dopey's hat green?

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    1. After years he can change his clothes xD.

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    2. Good point.

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  9. The silhouttes in The Index aren't from any of the pages. Are they in future pages?

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    1. When are you posting the new pages, then?

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    2. I don't know,it depends of my free time.

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  10. I hope Jaq and Gus free Cinderella from the ravens, or crows whatever. Although, it would might make a sacrifice

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  11. Two ravens... Doesn't that mean twice the monster or twice the stone.

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  12. I'm surprised your comic doesn't have songs. XD

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  13. Rose Red finding a key...Jasmine finding the glass slipper...Cinderella about to get attacked by the ravens... This Chapter is going to be the best yet!

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  14. What is Jasmine wearing? Did you make it yourself or is it from one of her movies?

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    1. She wears a djellaba, a traditional arabic robe.

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    2. Did you copy a picture or make it your own way?

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    3. I make my own design :)

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    4. Nice! I love all the clothes you've made for each character! You have an eye for design.

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    5. Not really, but the costume design is important for me :)

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  15. Wow, I never expected that Jasmine will appear in this chapter (Finally!!). I thought she will appear, like, later :)
    Who could have ever thought that the glass slipper escaped from Maleficent's clutch. It's like it has a will of its own, or was it enchanted by the FairyGodmother previously???

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    1. OR maybe, Cinderella's Fairy Godmother's spirit is in there?!

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    2. No xD. For the moment is a spoiler.

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  16. Are you finished the chapter or is it you didn't have time to post it all?

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  17. Ever notice Maleficent and Lady Tremaine have the same head shape and chin? They were both voiced by the same voice actress(in they're original movies too). Maleficent was inspired by Lady Tremaine previously. They were voiced by Eleanor Audley originally, and today, they are voiced by Susan Blakeslee.

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    1. For that reasons they're my favorites villains.

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  18. Snow White - Chastity
    Belle - Patience
    Aurora - Forgiveness
    Cinderella - Kindness
    Ariel - Sacrifice
    Jasmine - Diligence

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    1. Not at all in this story xD.

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    2. "Virtue" is their greatest power...XD

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  19. I KNEW CINDERELLA'S PRINCE WAS ALIVE!!! The only question is... where's Cinderella's Fairy Godmother? I also noticed Alphonse's sword has blood on it. What has he been through? By the way, is there a new page every 2 days, or so? One more thing, now that Cinderella's prince is with her, I don't see how harm can come to her.

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    1. You'll see soon...I try to upload pages every week.

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  20. Have you noticed that some Disney Princesses have their hair fall out of place when they're in danger? Or if they're wearing a ponytail, the hair tie falls off and and your hair is down? It happened to Belle a lot. I'm surprised it hasn't happened to Cinderella in your comic.

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    1. Not for the moment, I like the bow xD. There will be a lot of dangerous situations in the story, they can't lost their ponytail in every of them xD.

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  21. I don't see how Cinderella can get hurt now that her prince is with her. Harm can't come to her now, right?

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    1. They're still in a dangerous place with monsters...

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    2. I just hope her prince doesn't die like Aurora's. I hope her silhoutte in the index isn't her crying about her dead prince too.

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  22. I certainly hope Alphonse doesn't do all the work. Doesn't it just annoy you that the "Damsel in Distress" just sits back and watches the guy do all the work?

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    1. Of course not. This story is not about poor ladies in distress.

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  23. Are Mulan and Pocahontas minor characters only?

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    1. But it's mostly focused on the main six only, right?

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  24. Shouldn't Snow White be at her prince's castle instead?

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    1. I prefered let Snow White her legitimate kingdom. Also it's important for the story.

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  25. Is Red Rose's doll Rapunzel? And GOD. You are not going to kill Alphonse too, right? Phillip's death almost gave me a heart attack.

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    1. The doll is Giselle. You're not the only one who say the same about Alphonse xD.

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    2. Rapunzel, Giselle, there's not much difference *hides behind the wall shamefully* Please don't kill him :c

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  26. When will something new be posted? I always check your blog, your fan club, and your deviantART account to see if there is something new.

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    1. I`ll post a few more pages next week :)

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    2. Can't wait ;)

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    3. Not to rush you but...WHY NOT THIS WEEK?!

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    4. Cause I don't have time this week o.o

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  27. Yeah, Lady Tremaine herself is pretty much like Maleficent minus all the sorcery. But, with Cinderella's Fairy Godmother's Magic Wand,(whice Tremaine got ahold of in "Cinderella III: A Twist In Time") she does come pretty close.

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    1. Yes, they're in the same line.

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  28. omg i love this :D how do you make that is it on the computer or something ? the story is really awesome (:

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  29. What they teach us:
    Snow White - Your only goal in life is the acceptance of a man, if you're beautiful enough, some women may try to kill you
    Belle - Appearances don't matter, unless you're a girl, you must persist in a relationship even if the guy is abusive
    Aurora - In life, you let someone else make all of your decisions for you, it's OK to be with the man who molests you in your sleep
    Cinderella - It's not hard work, but beauty that counts, all you need to do is to get a wealthy man to fall for you
    Ariel - It's OK to abandon your family for a guy, you have to be willing to drastically change your body to be with your man
    Jasmine - You must rebel against convention, and if you can't stand up to your parents, run away

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    1. I don't think that but this is not the place or moment for that type of comments.

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    2. This comment is from Paola Madrid B(for some reason it doesn't appear)
      I disagree a bit. Snow White was pure and innocent. She teaches us to be kind with the nature. Belle was brave and smart. She teaches us to don't judge people so fast and that reading is a good thing. Aurora, well she was a dreamer. I think that's enough. Cinderella was an abused child. They didn't harmed her physically, but sentimental and psychologically (?) they did. She teaches us to be brave and nice, obedient (because she did everything Lady Tremaine ordered her) and to believe. Ariel was independent and lovable. She teaches us that sometimes we have to give up on important thing, to reach those other things we need. In her case was Eric. At the end of the movie, she was OK with her family so your 'abandon your family for a guy' doesn't count. AND Eric loved her, even when she was again a mermaid. Jasmine was super brave and free-spirited. Well, she did run away, but that was because she wanted to marry someone she loved. So, she teaches us to keep looking forward our true love, not to give up because of the circumstances. That's everything. I mean, you surely have made great remarks on their characters and what we have learned, but they're just the bad stuff. Here are some of the good points they have. Sorry if I annoyed you.

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  30. I'm surprised Lucifer survived that fall in the first movie. He now has 8 lives. I don't think Lucifer will be killed 8 times in this story.

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    1. Well, for the moment one more life is enought for him :)

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  31. Looks like these fairytales ended in lies XD. Why? 1. They had sequels. Sure they lived happily again in the end, but usually around the middle, they're sad. 2. It says "and they lived happily ever after" when really, it's THIS... It proves it ALL.

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  32. If only there was a video game made out of this. Reminds me of Kingdom Hearts and Epic Mickey.

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  33. OMG Alphonseeeeee!!!!! D: Will you kill all the princes? Because if you kill Aladdin, Adam and Eric, I will kill you! >:c
    This comic is amazing! I love Snow White with long hair!!! And her daughter is the most adorable child that I've ever seen :'D
    I can't wait to see the full chapter!!! And the next one and the next...
    Nice job!

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    1. He is not dead, he is trapped O.o...
      Thanks for your comment!

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    2. I know he's not dead, but I'm sure he's gonna die :'(
      You're welcome! :D

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  34. omg! this comic is amazing and it really is a crooked tale. 0.0
    but i want more!! XD
    you have an amazing art and this story is awesome.
    i can't wait to see the next one. x3

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  35. Did Lucifer just tie Alphonse up with his fur...?

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  36. Never mind, I just realized it was his paw.

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  37. One of your art pieces from deviantART has a guy with long black hair and green eyes. Who is he?

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    1. He is a future main character.

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    2. He kinda've looked like you when you had black hair. I'm suspicious now... Don't tell me you're gonna put YOURSELF in the story :| .

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    3. No, I didn't but thanks for the compliment xD.

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    4. His expression looked vacant. Like Prince Eric when he was hypnotized.

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    5. I bet he was that guy Flora, Fauna, and Merryweather were talking about. The guy who can travel between worlds...Right?

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  38. In your Threatened series, Aurora looked pretty serious like she was the leader or something. She looked like she was determined for revenge. Are you gonna make her like that.

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    1. Something like that but not that simple.

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  39. I'm surprised Cinderella finally did something XD!

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    1. She will do many things in this story :)

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    2. Great! She's my favorite Disney Princess! She's also been crowned "The Leader Of The Disney Princesses." According to votes, she's still been able to maintain her title.

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    3. She is my favorite too :)

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  40. What if... you were asked to work for Disney! I mean, look at your art! Impressive and such a masterpiece! It's just too bad they got into CGI animating...

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    1. Thanks! But I'm not interested in animation(and I hate CGI)...Plus, for me, nowadays Disney is dead.

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    2. Nowadays, the movies are not bad. But they don't have that magical feeling The Disney Classics had.

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    3. For me their actual movies don't have quality in plot, design, animation and even soul. They're just making commercial, expired and not timeless movies...

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    4. What happened to the (G)Olden days? I miss the days back then. We had good TV Shows, Cartoons, Video Games, and Movies. Look back on it. Then, see how the world's changed so much. It's like a missing part of your life...

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  41. You should try selling these :) ! Get a copy machine! Then, there shall be extra copies!

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    1. I don't mind it but it's too expensive print full color versions of all chapters...

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  42. Can't wait to see the rest of the chapter! I love how you quoted the movie "Lucifer, let him go!" Excited to read more!

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    1. Thanks! Glad you get the quote ^^

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  43. If Alphonse turns into a monster by those ravens, then Cinderella must kiss him no matter how terrifying he looks(like how Belle saw The Beast's goodness from inside)! Like they say, "TRUE LOVE CONQUERS ALL!" XD

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  44. I'm glad these princesses get to fight, while still looking PRETTY XD.

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  45. Belle, Cinderella, Ariel, and Jasmine are the only ones who got 3 movies.
    Belle - Beauty and The Beast, Beauty and The Beast: The Enchanted Christmas, Beauty and The Beast: Belle's Magical World
    Cinderella - Cinderella, Cinderella II: Dreams Come True, Cinderella III: A Twist In Time
    Ariel - The Little Mermaid, The Little Mermaid II: Return To The Sea, The Little Mermaid: Ariel's Beginning
    Jasmine - Aladdin, The Return Of Jafar, Aladdin and The King Of Theives
    Well, Jasmine got a 4th appearance too in "Disney Princess Enchanted Tales: Follow Your Dreams", her own half of the movie(with Aurora getting the other half). So if "The Little Crooked Tale" becomes a movie, 3 of them would have a 4th appearance, and Jasmine would get a 5th appearance. Snow White gets a 2nd, and Aurora gets a 3rd.

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  46. You know the picture of the six princesses up there? Are you gonna update it and change it and add Pochahontas and Mulan in it when they make their debut?

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    1. I don't think so, they're not main characters. Anyway there will be many differents blog headers.

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    2. Will it change as the story progresses on?

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    3. When will that start happening? When you reach chapter 10, 12, or a higher number?

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  47. Are there any more pages you need to post?

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    1. Of course, the rest of the chapter.

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    2. I mean, any pages you've done.

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    3. Not for the moment, I do the pages in random order.

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  48. When the princesses meet, I hope it doesn't become a GIRL POWER thing XD. I don't think meeting in a nightmare doesn't really count for Aurora and Snow White. Cinderella saw Ariel in a mirror and Ariel saw her in the water. Snow White, Aurora, and Cinderella only saw Ariel in a vision. Adam mentioned Belle only saw Ariel in a dream. Aurora saw Snow White again in a mirror in her nightmare showing how Snow White got poisoned. Belle didn't really get a chance to talk Ariel due to her being unconscious. And Jasmine only found Cinderella's glass slipper. None of them actually know each others names! Like I said, I hope it doesn't become a girl power thing.

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    1. Will they be altogether or in pairs? Like they were in deviantART, Cinderella and Ariel, Snow White and Aurora, and Belle and Jasmine. Or Cinderella and Aurora in Threatened 4

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    2. I don't get what do you mean with "girl power" o.o...
      They will be all together in the future progressively.

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  49. That guy from deviantART with long black hair and green eyes. He's male, right?

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    1. I bet he was that guy Flora, Fauna, and Merryweather were talking about. The guy who can travel between worlds, right?

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    2. SAY WHAT?! YOU'RE SERIOUS?! IT SEEMED LIKE IT WAS HIM O.O!

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  50. Are you going to remake Chapter 4 and 5 as well? I don't think Chapter 6 needs a remake, though.Ar

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    1. I'll change only a few panels.

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  51. Like Aurora's actual hair color? :)

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    1. Which Chapters are you changing? :)

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    2. Two and three in this moment.

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  52. On deviantART, you had a bunny named Britney. How's she doing? :)

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    1. Oh... I'm so sorry for you. :(

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  53. I certainly sure hope that there's no betrayal between the villains. :|

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  54. Is Belle and Ariel in this Chapter?

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  55. These villains are evil not for the best reasons...
    The Evil Queen Grimhilde - Snow White was named "The Fairest One Of All" and The Queen just wanted her title back.
    Gaston - He was just really rude. He wanted Belle for himself and let his jealousy of The Beast get the best of him.
    Maleficent, The Mistress Of All Evil - She just wasn't invited to a feast. Enough said.
    Lady Madonna Tremaine - She was just jealous Cinderella had charm and beauty Drizella and Anastasia didn't have. So she decided to make her life miserable.
    Ursula, The Banished Sea Witch - She wanted to be "The Ruler Of The Sea." She didn't actually want to harm anyone. She started to do that because her eels were destroyed.
    Jafar, The Sorcerer - He wanted power... That's all I'm gonna say...

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    1. As the main villain of my story, Maleficent will have better reasons for her acts.

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    2. Revenge is definitely one of them.

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  56. Have you seen The Disney Princess Palace Pets? This is taking it too far. It's a spin-off franchise. First, their redesigns, now this! Why couldn't they use animals from their movies that ACTUTALLY appeared?!

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  57. When will you be posting a new page? :)

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    1. I'll upload a few pages this week.

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  58. Your comic reminds me of "Once Upon A Time". You know that show?

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    1. Yes but I only like the first season. I think there is actually not a similarity between my story and the show. Only the fairytales characters crossover but that idea isn't new.

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  59. Despite being from different countries, each princess talks in English to make kids understand better. Snow White is German, Belle is French, Aurora is British, Cinderella is Italian, Ariel is Atlantican, and Jasmine is Arabic. Wow... I just realized they haven't made a Spanish princess yet.

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    1. I think Cinderella is British or French. In this story her clothes are more British style.

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  60. I don't really see the main plot in your story. I just see the princesses' lives are turning strange, getting attacked or something like that. Can you please tell me when I'm gonna see the plot point? :)

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    1. The main plot hasn't started yet. I can't say the specifical chapter but in short the main plot will begin when all the princesses join together against their enemies.

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  61. I bet her stepmother confronts her in the next page. ;)

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  62. Why did Gus mention The King? Does he sense him or something?

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    1. The King is Alphonse. Cinderella calls him "Your Majesty" and "my king".

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  63. I hope you finish this Chapter before August? :)

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    1. I don't believe it, there's a lot of unfinished pages yet.

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    2. Only seven pages left...

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    3. For my little free time, that's a lot of pages xD.

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  64. I sure hope Alphonse wasn't squished to death by the door and Lucifer. And I certainly hope that his blood is not spewing from under the door.

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    1. Sorry...but I think the situation is clear...:(

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    2. Yeah... I have a feeling that all the princes will be dead... :(

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  65. Seriously, where is Cinderella's Fairy Godmother? Is she in this Chapter at all? Don't tell me she was killed too... She has a magic wand in her hands.

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    1. Yes, she is alive. And she'll appear soon.

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    2. You also said Lady Tremaine will have a main villain role in this Chapter. It doesn't look like there are enough pages to show her villainy...

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    3. The important fact is her acts, she won't need many pages for them.

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  66. Are all the princes gonna die? O.o when Phillip died it was very original, but if all of them die....

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    1. No. That would be repetitive. But these deaths are necessary for my story.

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  67. OMG... This is so sad!!! I cried when I saw Alphonse's blood... And poor Cindy!!! (With Cindy I mean Cinderella.) I can feel her pain, I just imagined my boyfriend and me at the same situation and I cried a lot!!! I love your story, but it's sooo sad... I can't wait to see Aurora's reaction at Philip's death, Cinderella's confrontation with Tremaine and Jasmine's life!
    Congrats. for your amazing work!

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    1. Thanks! It's true there're many sad things in the story but it was necessary for create a real and hard atmosphere since this not the typical princesses' story.
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    2. AURORA AND CINDERELLA SHALL AVENGE THEIR PRINCES!!!

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    3. Although, revenge might not be the best thing to do...

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  68. I realized you made Cinderella cry in the 13th page... Ironically, 13 is an unlucky number!

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  69. I hope Snow White shows a tough side in your comic. I read that she's the only Disney Princess not to show any tough, rebellious, sassy, or spunky side.

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    1. She was a little girl after all. Now she is adult, queen and mother so the circumstances will affect her actions.

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    2. Snow White is 14, Belle is 17, Aurora turns 16 during her movie, Cinderella is 19, Ariel is 16, and Jasmine turns 16 at the end of her movie. Ariel was 17 when she had Melody as a baby and Melody grew up 12 years later, which means... Ariel is 29... I bet they're all much older in your story.

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    3. The oldest is Ariel but now she is about 18. So now Cinderella is the oldest(about 22).

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    4. Well, in a deleted scene in Snow White's movie called "The Bedroom Argument", it showed Snow White had a manipulative side by telling the dwarfs that "she's not afraid" of the dangerous things she might encounter. Reverse psychology, right there.

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  70. I wonder what Jasmine will do with Cinderella's glass slipper. Those kind of shoes aren't very common in Jasmine's country...

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    1. The sure thing is that she won't fit the slipper xD.

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  71. Did you know Aurora and Belle did the exact same dance with their princes at the end of their movies? :)

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  72. Here are some of the characters you didn't include(not trying to be negative here, just saying):
    Snow White - The Hunstman, her animal friends
    Belle - Lumière, Cogsworth, Belle's Father, and the other enchanted objects reverted back into humans, Gaston
    Aurora - Her parents, Phillip's Father, Diablo(Maleficent's Raven), Maleficent's Minions, and Aurora's animal friends
    Cinderella - The rest of her mice friends, her bird friends, Pom Pom(that white cat with the pink bow from Cinderella 2), Major(that gray horse from the original movie), and Bruno
    Ariel - Flounder, Sebastian, her sisters, King Triton, Ursula's eels
    Jasmine - Aladdin, Abu, The Genie, The Sultan, Jafar

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    1. Oh, and Rajah(Jasmine's Tiger).

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  73. Have you ever been to Disneyland? :)

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    1. I haven't been there either. My parents can't afford it. I think I'll have to wait a few years...

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  74. I hope every character that died is revived somehow(not including the villains)in the end.

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